Tuesday, July 28, 2015

The Corom Lama -- Edits & Publishing

C**** meaning: P***...as opposed to Dalai, meaning: Ocean. Life was never kind to the man who was to become the Corom Lama, but then, he was not nice to it. Doing an edit, re-edit-- this was originally intended to be a full novel, but plans fell thru on that front, so... here were some stray notes and considerations (I hope to have it completed this fall or by the end of this year):

~He is a sequel character, late of CoI, but O.M. never knew him, or of him==
In this, it is too many voices speaking thru the 2nd Person narrators, and the over-use of different cues & symbols denoting who is speaking. >>
{The recounting of Lama's assassin past was foreshadowing for Lama being alone w/ BoD again--> and BoM is left bereft and frightened ==>
  Make narrative in Present Tense unless a past event is being recalled, otherwise the story is all in the here & now>>>
>Keep BoD dialect the same << -_-_-_>
the 1st GA counters with passages from the Bible used as spells so he can kind of force his way back in--->>
He was one of the disciple's close followers, but had not completely gone thru with the transformation~~>
These are all accusatory:::Every section, every part the narrator is speaking to the Lama (You, You, You) and accusing—>
{{He's done the whole Drugs-thing, and has moved on to going thru peoples garbage,>,
[[The Corom Lama is one of the fmr. Begging Cultists]>
>>>This guy feels that his life has been hijacked, and sidetracked, by another somehow...


 If I can make any sense of that... I will.




[O.K., well, I've managed to navigate the legal hurdles & go international---on the advice of counsel---to get this published and it is up and at 'em on KOBO, which is Rakuten's Kindle-like platform.]








Monday, May 18, 2015

Ever Been to a Biker Shootout?

So you went to Twin Peaks looking for the Log Lady & some pie -- & this happens...

How does one avoid such a thing? You might ask... Well, let's start with some basics, because developing proper cognitive abilities, as much as being able to decipher right from wrong, is absolutely fundamental. Along with reading:

Promise To Read X# of Books - Begin

ATTENTION, CLASS!

 And yet = some of these fellas didn't get the syllabus... or just plain fell asleep during reading time. They may have to miss out on the next Field Trip:


>>Whoop-de-Doo....>> & at 'Twin Peaks' no Less!




*Show & Tell*
  • The deadly Waco biker brawl?

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    SoM 10 hours ago 9 6
    IDK, but I've never heard of any of these groups. And looking at them, they appear awfully 'clean.' I'm thinking these people are Sons of Anarchy wannabes with Franchisee clubs playing weekend warrior.
    Which makes this thing all the more absurd-- because the Hells Angels & Outlaws of old, they are not. The 'Real' biker gangs had guys that looked like the filth was in their DNA not in a Tattoo, they had their women on the backs who looked rougher than any of these characters, and everything about them spoke of walking/riding degradation and death.
    But these dudes? At least a 4-day week working the phones and systems in an IT Dept....
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      The Bandito's are the real deal gang.
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    I didnt see anyone riding with "White Sneakers"...
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  • A10 hours ago
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    They are NOT "playing weekend warriors" they ARE the real thing. Thugs!!! MEAN THUGS!!
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  • S10 hours ago
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    @ Sounds like you watch a lot of TV
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  • J10 hours ago
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    What an idiotic comment. So they are not scuzzy looking enough for you to label them real badasses? maybe you should invite them over to your house for dinner to see if you can get them to live to up your skumbagg high standards.
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  • S10 hours ago
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    S - the Bandidos are very real and very violent. They have been around a long time and are known rivals of the HA's. They even have chapters in Europe. They are known drug dealers and mules. They are not SofA wannabees. I don't know as much about the Cossack's, but they are legit. Don't let the lack of an "old look" fool you. These guys are nasty.
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  • B10 hours ago
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    Yeah, well if those are wannabes I'd hate to see what the people refer to would do....9 dead 18 wounded...I'd say far from wannabes
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  • R 10 hours ago
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    I must agree with R. The Bandidos are not to be taken lightly. Extremely dangerous. And why would the media not name the gangs? Their pictures all have them wearing their club patches.
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  • W10 hours ago
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    Smart, actually these thugs will give the Hells Angels a run for their money. They are dangerous and while they are not well known, they are definitely not working phones and systems at an IT Dept. The Bandido's have killed rival gangs including the Hells Angels who came to Texas attempting to start a new club. Don't sell them short, just because they look like they have had a bath doesn't mean they aren't very dangerous.
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  • R10 hours ago
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    @ W,,, AHAHAHAH you made me laugh so hard with your comment about them giving the Hells Angels a run for their money... The Hells Angels can destroy these weekend warrior banditos anytime. LOLOLOLOL Hells Angels would make the banditos their little biatches lol
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  • S 10 hours ago
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    R - the Bandidos have been at war with the Hell's Angels since the 1980's. They are well documented. Besides, what's up with the trashtalk. You seem to be rooting for the Hell's Angels like they are your favorite football team. Are you a Hell's Angel wannabee??? Buy a bike first and I don't mean a Trek.


    {And here is an Addendum to this piece, Comments from a later take on events (Nappy time will follow w/ apple sauce):



    The Mystery Of The Flying Orange Pumpkin - Steven Kellogg
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    • Difference b/n perceptions of Waco, Baltimore

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      I wasn't necessarily paying close-close attention to the pics of the cops. All I saw were them with assault rifles for the most part: whether they were serious or loosy-goosy I didn't seek to determine.

      But the pics and shots of the bikers was incredibly telling. They were lined up, uncuffed like so many minors busted at a kegger. With their phones & devices out texting and maybe making a movie for all I know. I was expecting their parents to pull up at any moment and drag li'l billy off to the car by the ear while mama's swattin' him all along the way.

      It's unreal the difference between white criminal-perps & black legit-protesters.....
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        Mr. S, what you've just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever heard. At no point in your rambling, incoherent response were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this room is now dumber for having listened to it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul.
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    • J 16 hours ago
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      @ s, your sick.
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    • J 16 hours ago
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      they didn't act ike a damn fool because cops had high powered weapons and would have shot them, and by the way cops are ready for backlash
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    • J 16 hours ago
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      Did you notice how calmly they waited to be arrested, they knew how to act toward cops. That's the difference between white and blacks, the blacks don't know hoe to act when arrested. That's why they get shot or hurt afterwards. I know both groups are in the wrong but, there is a difference how they react.
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Zzzzzzzzzz...............................


[Update}:: 5/25/17 -- http://www.orlandosentinel.com/news/lake/os-outlaws-kingsmen-challenging-clubs-arrests-20170524-story.html

Outlaws challenging ‘motorcycle clubs throughout Florida,' cops say...



[[As I thought, it was just a matter of time before the Real 'Outlaw' MCs began to try and make inroads w/ all the wannabe weekend MCers out there. And they are playing for keeps! If left unchecked, I would expect to see the 'Weekend Warriors' numbers drop significantly for fear of the consequences of riding w/out training wheels on... ]]

Saturday, February 7, 2015

The Crim Bits Photo Book


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>>While the name on the author leaf is a 'Bel M.' ...Giving credit where credit is due: these derive from the oft-scurrilous work of one, Mounce Tibbly. Of 'Crime Lord' fame; and fmr. employer of both J. Lopp & D. Claygoop.

Here is a look at him as Smooch16





[Disclaimer: I neither approve or disapprove of the man's work]